Horeb's Shadow

Submitted by C B Wright on

Although I'm not sure it's still widely celebrated, today is International Pixel-Stained Technopeasant Day. As a Pixel-Stained Technopeasant, I would like to offer up this fragment for your potential, theoretical enjoyment.

This was my NaNoWriMo project from... 2014, I think. I didn't make the 50K mark (obviously! It's a little over 11K) but I liked the setup enough to think I might do something with it someday.

I still like the setup, and I still might do something with it someday.

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So I read this and enjoyed

So I read this and enjoyed it very much. I hope you do do something more with it.

But then I went and read The Points Between, which I have been trying to avoid till you finish it :(

If there are two different ways the story might go, how about trying writing both and seeing which you prefer? You could even post the one you don't keep for people to enjoy :)